Question

[Nguyễn Hoàng Linh]

Can you correct the passage ? Write the correct version .

          My father has unusual hobby carving eggshells as everyone knows eggshells are very fragile my dad can make beautiful pieces of art from  empty eggshells it is amazing he started the hobby five years ago after a trip to the us where he saw some carved eggshells in an art gallery my father did not go to class to learn how to carve he learned everything from the internet .

Answer 1

[Crystal Clover]

     My father has unusual hobby: carving eggshells. As everyone knows, eggshells are very fragile but my dad can make beautiful pieces of art from  empty eggshells. It is amazing. He started the hobby five years ago after a trip to the us where he saw some carved eggshells in an art gallery. My father did not go to class to learn how to carve. He learned everything from the internet .

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Answer 2

[Nguyển Quỳnh Anh]

n you correct the passage ? Write the correct version .

          My father has unusual hobby carving eggshells. As everyone knows eggshells are very fragile but my dad can make beautiful pieces of art from  empty eggshells. It is amazing. He started the hobby five years ago after a trip to the us where he saw some carved eggshells in an art gallery My father did not go to class to learn how to carve He learned everything from the internet .