5. Look at your volunteer ideas in Speaking 4. Choose one idea and write a short paragraph about it. (Nhìn những ý tưởng tình nguyện trong phần Nói 4. Chọn một ý kiến và viết một đoạn văn ngắn về nó.)
Example :
I want to raise funds for Street children. I want to do it because we will be able to provide them with food and books. They will no longer be hungry. They will be able to read. I will ask my friends to help me. We will make postcards and sell them.
I want to raise money for the street children because I think it's the best way to help them. I will ask for the help from everybody to raise a fund. With this fund, we can provide the street children the basic needs for life. Then, I want to train them. I want them to have a job so that they can have a better life. They won't have to wander on the street and no one can treat them badly. I will ask my friends for help to realize this idea.
Mình có thể sửa một số câu trong đoạn văn của bạn không ạ ?