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When I was 10 years old, I( was 1)moved to a new house. This house was very beautiful, and my room is beautiful, too!
When I opened the door, I could hardly believe what I saw. Had my wish come true? My room had been coloured by pink ! It is lighter and it also has a wide window from where you can see the mountains and a country landscape. It has a very big balcony with a view at the sea. There were many nice pictures hung on the wall. In one side, there is a huge bed covered by a patchwork cover, and small lamp on the bedside table. There not only a table, a desk with a computer but also a TV. My guitar and the piano were in the corner of the room and there were many beautiful colour lights on the ceiling. There was a small white rug on the wooden floor and plenty of books were on the shelves opposite to the bed.
I'm very grateful to my parrents that builded for me the best room ever that I never had before!
*: chú ý chia quá khứ như là câu đầu tiên, đã chia quá khứa là This house WAS beautiful rồi mà đoạn sau còn ns là my room IS beautiful nữa. còn câu I was moved là ko đc vì trong câu này chỉcần chia moved thôi chứ ko có was.
When I was 10 years old, I( was 1)moved to a new house. This house was very beautiful, and my room is beautiful, too!
When I opened the door, I could hardly believe what I saw. Had my wish come true? My room had been coloured by pink ! It is lighter and it also has a wide window from where you can see the mountains and a country landscape. It has a very big balcony with a view at the sea. There were many nice pictures hung on the wall. In one side, there is a huge bed covered by a patchwork cover, and small lamp on the bedside table. There not only a table, a desk with a computer but also a TV. My guitar and the piano were in the corner of the room and there were many beautiful colour lights on the ceiling. There was a small white rug on the wooden floor and plenty of books were on the shelves opposite to the bed.
I'm very grateful to my parrents that builded for me the best room ever that I never had before!
*: chú ý chia quá khứ như là câu đầu tiên, đã chia quá khứa là This house WAS beautiful rồi mà đoạn sau còn ns là my room is beautiful nữa. còn câu I was moved là ko đc vì trong câu này chỉcần chia moved thôi chứ ko có was.
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When I was 10 years old, I was =>was(bỏ) moved to a new house. This house was very beautiful, and my room is=>was beautiful, too!
When I opened the door, I could hardly believe what I saw. Had my wish come true? The room painted pink is my room! It is lighter and it also has a wide window from where you can see the mountains and a country landscape. It has=>had a very big balcony with a view at the sea. There are=>were many nice pictures hunging from the wall. In one side, there is=>was a huge bed covered by a patchwork cover, and small lamp on the bedside table. There not only a table, a desk with a computer but alsao=>also a TV. My guitar and the piano are in the corner of the room and there are many colour lights in the ceiling. There is a small white rug on the wooden floor and plenty of books are on the shelves opposite to the bed.
Thanked to my parents that building for me a nice room!
Còn thiếu sót nhiều mong BN bỏ qua
1.hometown => town
2.bỏ "in"
3.all => a lot
4.have => had
5.beautiful => more beautiful
7.spacious and nice => more spacious and nicer.
9.uesd => used
14.recent years => in recent years
15.run => running
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Dear David,
I sympathize with your dissatisfaction with your roommate and I also thank you for your information about your roommate
As I know, your roommate is a new student at our college. Many new students are often unfamiliar with collective life. Therefore, they can make other students discontent, particularly for former's. If I were you, I would talk honestly with him on the issues with which you are not satisfied. Then he will possibly change his life style, so that you both will understand and respect each other.
Actually, at present, our dormitory still has two rooms.If you do not like it here, you can move room at the end of this month. However, there is no single room anymore and you must share a room with someone else. But you do not worry. The roommate you will live with is a good student. He studies hard. He is one of the best students who was rewarded one of by the college for good achievements in the last semester. Therefore, I hope you and your future roommate can get on well with and support each other in study.
As a person in charge of the accommodation, tomorrow, I will meet your roommate and talk with him about your complaint to help him recognize his fault and avoid disturbing you. If he still does not change his habits, I will force him to move out of the dormitory. I hope it will be of benefit to you and others.
Finally, wish you would get along well with new your roommate. Besides, I hope that you will do well in your exams next term. If you would like any further information about this, you can come to my office or email: leetran@abccollege.com
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Lee Tran
Dear Peter,
I hope you are free next Sunday to come to our housewarming party. Our new house is just wonderful! Finally, we have enough rooms for every one. There are three besdrooms: one for Henry and me, one for Paul, and one gor the little baby. The living room is my favorite place because it has a fire place and a beautiful view of the nearby mountain. The house isn't perfect. It needs painting and repairing, but it doesn't matter for me. We'll repair it.
Write to me soon and let me know if you could come and visit us
I am looking forward to meeting you. Best wishes for you!
Love,
Susan
1.When is the housewarming party?
....................next Sunday......................................................................
2.How many rooms does the new house have?
..............................4..........................................................
3.Why does the writer enjoy the living room?
...................................because it has a fire place and a beautiful view of the nearby mountain...........................................................
4.Does the house need painting?
..................................yes, it does...............................................
1. Next Sunday
2. The new house have 4 rooms
3. Because it has a fire place and a beautiful view of the nearby mountain
4. Yes,it does