Question

[Yuu~chan]

IV: There are 8 mistakes .( 10 points)
The games have been a great success in promotion international friendship and understanding, and in proving that being disability doesn’t mean you can’t joy sport. One of small source of disappointment for those who organize and take part in the games, however, have been the unwillingness of the International Olympic Committee to included disabled events at the Olympic Games for the able-bodied. Perhaps a little more years are still needed to convince those fortunately enough not to be disable that their disable fellows athletes should not be excluded. So the annual games for the disabled are being started at Stoke Mandeville, in England in the 1948.
       Example: promotion => promoting

Answer 1

[Thu Hồng]

The games have been a great success in promotion international friendship and understanding, and in proving that being disability doesn’t mean you can’t joy sport. One of small source of disappointment for those who organize and take part in the games, however, have been the unwillingness of the International Olympic Committee to included disabled events at the Olympic Games for the able-bodied. Perhaps a little more years are still needed to convince those fortunately enough not to be disable that their disable fellows athletes should not be excluded. So the annual games for the disabled are being started at Stoke Mandeville, in England in the 1948.
       Example: promotion => promoting

disability => disabled

have => has

little => few

fortunately => fortunate

be disable => disabled

 disable =>  disabled

the 1948 => 1948

Answer 2

[Yuu~chan]

Em cảm ơn cô ạ!!! ><