Question

[Yên Ngô]

my family has three people . Including my father, my mother and me. My father is an official, my father is forty years old this year and so is my mother. He likes to read newspapers, watch football and introduce videos about a certain country. And my mother is a seamstress, she often watches my mother's favorite shows. I often help my mother make cakes. I am a student, I can help my father and mother with the housework. I love my family very much because it has the love that my parents have for me. The introduction to my family is over. Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

[Yên Ngô]

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Answer 2

[Bagel]

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 My father is an official, my father->he(Thay từ tránh lặp lại nhiều lần) is forty years old this year and so is my mother. 

He likes to read->reading newspapers, watch->watching football and introduce->introducing videos about a certain country.

she often watches my mother's->her favorite shows

 I often help my mother make cakes.->Câu này nên để ở phần giới thiệu bản thân

I am a student, I can->thay bằng trạng từ chỉ tần suất như always, usually,.....(Vì làm việc nhà ai cũng biết rồi quan trọng có thường xuyên hay không thôi ) help my father and mother with the housework.