Question

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1. Talk about your hobby:

My hobby is playing piano, that hobby originated from the first time I saw my dad playing piano. When I was 11 years old, I went to study piano and know more about music. upto now the present time I can play a piano fluently

2. What should we do to keep fit and stay healthy:

Health is very important for our life so we should do more exercise eat more fruit or vegetables,sleep more.We should not eat more junk food because we are putting on weight .And should eat more fresh fish ,like sushi and will be healthier .We should not seafood because we feel sick and we have a stomachache

Cho em hỏi là 2 đoạn văn trên có sai hay còn thiếu chỗ nào không ạ, giúp em với mai phải thi rồi!

Answer 1

[B.Trâm]

2. What should we do to keep fit and stay healthy:

Health plays an important role in our lives so we should do more exercise, eat more fruits and vegetables and sleep more ,too. Moreover, we should not eat a lot of junk food because it contains things that are not good for our health and we can put on weight , either. And we also should eat nutritious food to become healthier In short, if we want to keep fit and stay healthy, we ought to go on diet like I have mentioned above.

Answer 2

[B.Trâm]

1. Talk about your hobby:

My hobby is playing piano, that hobby is originated from the first time I saw my dad playing -> play piano. When I was 11 years old, I went to study piano -> started/ began studying/ learning hơ to play the piano and know more about music. upto now the present time -> ??? up to now/ up to present I can play a piano fluently

2. What should we do to keep fit and stay healthy:

Health is very important for our life so we should do more exercise eat more fruit or vegetables,sleep more. -> Cũng ok rồi nhưng Trâm nghĩ sửa thế này thì ok hơn nè : Health plays an important role in our lives so we should do more exercise, eat more fruits and vegetables and sleep more ,too. Moreover, we should not eat more -> a lot of junk food because we are putting on weight -> it contains things that are not good for our health and we can put on weight , either. .And -> And we also should eat more fresh fish ,like sushi and will be healthier ->??? Trâm ko hiểu ý câu này và nó cũng ko đúng ngữ pháp nha. Đổi đi, And we also should eat nutritious food to become healthier .We should not eat seafood because we feel sick and we have a stomachache -> ??? Ăn đồ biển đã đc chế biến chín rồi thì có sao đâu nhỉ? Thôi, ý này bỏ đi rồi kết. In short, if we want to keep fit and stay healthy, we ought to go on diet like I have mentioned above.