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My neighborhood in my father's story is now different from that neighborhood. My neighborhood is very poor in his story. Everyone is living a hard life at that moment. Lack of food, lack of money. It is different now. People no longer live a hard life. They've got enough food, enough money, a house for everybody, and a lot more stuff. Sentiments are the only things that don't change. Everybody will still be very pleased. They work together, and when they need to support each other, that's a privilege. That makes my village, for everyone, a wonderful place. People are just farmers, but in the face of suffering, they have unity. And when they have money in their hands, they are always in unity with each other, they are friendly, they are supportive, they are good people. The landscape is much like the old days. That mountain, that river. Nature, with humans, is peace. People live with nature, people create things from nature, and nature is still accessible to people, providing them with resources to build their home. That's what people are looking for, and they deal with it very well. That's what I can tell about my home village. My village is a beautiful place, in my opinion.
My home village is now different from the village in my father’s story. in his story, my village is very poor.Everyone live a hard life that time. People lack of food, of money. Now, it is different. People don’t live a hard life anymore. They have enough food, enough money, everyone got a house, and many more things. The only things that doesn’t change is sentiment. Everyone always be very happy. They live together, help each other when they need, that isa luxury.That makes my village a wonderful place for everyone. People are just farmer, but they solidarity in the face of penury. And when they have money in their hands, they still solidarity they are friendly with others, they are helpful, they are good people. That’s about people.Landscape is still like the old days. That river, that mountain. Nature is harmony with people. People live with nature, people product things of nature, and nature always open-handed with people, give them resource for themto build their house. That is what people seek, and they live with it very well.That’s all I can say about my home village, in my opinion, my village is a wonderful place. War does not determine who is right, only who is left:” Ask not what your country can do for you but what you can do for your country”.
Where I was born and grew up in Hanoi. The city’s children is a growing modern city. Roads wander wide. The way the two buildings grow up san suicide. Hanoi’s most beautiful at night, then coats the city as a new coat. Where Where electric lighting as I am sa. They are the parents area for walking in the West Lake. In the air is cool and fresh. Lake blue, like a cosmic giant carpet. Coastal lakes are found standing tilt touches down in their reflected nothing more of a young woman doing coast. I am very proud of themselves as citizens Hanoi. The people of Hanoi elegance and hospitality.
Life in the hometown is much better than in the city. I'd like to live in the hometown because of its clean air and many different things. People here are very friendly, kind and hard-working. You should spend at least one day to enjoy the life here. Walking through rice paddies and hills can make you feel better than spending all day to your smart phone or computer. Or working on the farm, growing and harvesting your products are many amazing solutions to try. Pollution in the hometown is not as serious as in the city, so people here are healthy and live longer. Fresh air and products are very safe, too. Maybe you can find many local dishes and like it, I think. So why don't you go and try it now?
Villages are a beauty and today`s generation is really missing the beauty of villages. Villages are so silent and calm and pollution free. Though I live in a city with the maddening crowd and sound, my parents used to live in villages and I have been there many times.Both my parents come from villages, and I look forward to go their places during my vacations. It is so calm and peaceful and the beauty of nature is just fantastic. With not many families around, they know each other so well, that they all almost live like a large family. You could step into your neighbor’s house at any time and you would be welcomed with yummy dishes and snacks. Though the transportation has advanced, there are still places where you need to walk.I remember, while visiting my grandmother’s place, we had to walk through the paddy fields to reach her home!! It was such an experience that I guess very few, who are of my age would have hadThe backwaters are another beauty to the villages. You have small streams that club to the lakes and backwaters. This stream water is so fresh and crystal clear. You could walk through them and the cool water just rushes over your feet and makes you feel so cool. Hours could be spent by simply sitting and admiring the beauty of nature.The sunset is a beautiful scene to be viewed.
Air pollution: Definition: air pollution is a mixture of solid particles and gases in the air. CAuse: have a two main cause : The first is from nature as acid rain. The second is from people acting as vehicles emitting dust and smoke. Effect:harmful to humans , making animals and plants unable to live, causing serious illness. Sollution: planting trees, improve human working machines, educating people on mesures to raise awareness of environmental protection
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Villages are a beauty and today's generation is really missing the beauty of villages. Villages are so silent and calm and pollution free. Though I live in a city with the maddening crowd and sound, my parents used to live in villages and I have been there many times.Both my parents come from villages, and I look forward to go their places during my vacations. It is so calm and peaceful and the beauty of nature is just fantastic. With not many families around, they know each other so well, that they all almost live like a large family. You could step into your neighbor’s house at any time and you would be welcomed with yummy dishes and snacks. Though the transportation has advanced, there are still places where you need to walk.I remember, while visiting my grandmother’s place, we had to walk through the paddy fields to reach her home!! It was such an experience that I guess very few, who are of my age would have had The backwaters are another beauty to the villages. You have small streams that club to the lakes and backwaters. This stream water is so fresh and crystal clear. You could walk through them and the cool water just rushes over your feet and makes you feel so cool. Hours could be spent by simply sitting and admiring the beauty of nature.The sunset is a beautiful scene to be viewed.
Chúc bạn học tốt!
Bài của em về nội dung hợp lý, sử dụng nhiều từ vựng hay. Nhưng có một điểm em cần lưu ý đó là từ "villages". Khi em dùng dạng thức số nhiều của từ này thì em phải chú ý đến việc chia động từ to be ở đằng sau nhé (câu đầu tiên).
Tiếp theo ở dòng số 4 có cụm "my parents come from villages". Có 2 lỗi sai ở câu này. Đầu tiên, đó vẫn là từ "villages". Bố mẹ tôi cũng đều xuất thân từ làng quê thì village phải có "the" vì đó đã xác định rồi. Thứ hai đó là em đã chia sai thì của động từ "come" rồi, câu này đang nói về sự việc xảy ra trong quá khứ nên phải dùng là "came". Câu của em có thể sửa lại là "My parents came from the village/countryside"
Cũng ở dòng đó và có cụm "look forward to come their place", thiếu giới từ "to" em nhé!
Dòng số 12 có câu em dùng "streams" và câu sau em lại dùng là "this stream", em nên dùng đồng nhất dạng thức của từ nhé. Có thể em dùng ở câu trước là "a stream" thì câu sau em có thể dùng this stream. Hoặc là nếu câu trước em để streams thì câu sau em nên để "these streams" và chia động từ to be thành "are" nhé!
Anyway, ý tưởng của em tốt, từ vựng tốt. Goodluck!