Write a short paragraph about the changes in the countryside. (các bạn có thể cho mình ý để mình tự khai thác cũng đc)
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Villages are a beauty and today's generation is really missing the beauty of villages. Villages are so silent and calm and pollution free. Though I live in a city with the maddening crowd and sound, my parents used to live in villages and I have been there many times.Both my parents come from villages, and I look forward to go their places during my vacations. It is so calm and peaceful and the beauty of nature is just fantastic. With not many families around, they know each other so well, that they all almost live like a large family. You could step into your neighbor’s house at any time and you would be welcomed with yummy dishes and snacks. Though the transportation has advanced, there are still places where you need to walk.I remember, while visiting my grandmother’s place, we had to walk through the paddy fields to reach her home!! It was such an experience that I guess very few, who are of my age would have had The backwaters are another beauty to the villages. You have small streams that club to the lakes and backwaters. This stream water is so fresh and crystal clear. You could walk through them and the cool water just rushes over your feet and makes you feel so cool. Hours could be spent by simply sitting and admiring the beauty of nature.The sunset is a beautiful scene to be viewed.
Chúc bạn học tốt!
Bài của em về nội dung hợp lý, sử dụng nhiều từ vựng hay. Nhưng có một điểm em cần lưu ý đó là từ "villages". Khi em dùng dạng thức số nhiều của từ này thì em phải chú ý đến việc chia động từ to be ở đằng sau nhé (câu đầu tiên).
Tiếp theo ở dòng số 4 có cụm "my parents come from villages". Có 2 lỗi sai ở câu này. Đầu tiên, đó vẫn là từ "villages". Bố mẹ tôi cũng đều xuất thân từ làng quê thì village phải có "the" vì đó đã xác định rồi. Thứ hai đó là em đã chia sai thì của động từ "come" rồi, câu này đang nói về sự việc xảy ra trong quá khứ nên phải dùng là "came". Câu của em có thể sửa lại là "My parents came from the village/countryside"
Cũng ở dòng đó và có cụm "look forward to come their place", thiếu giới từ "to" em nhé!
Dòng số 12 có câu em dùng "streams" và câu sau em lại dùng là "this stream", em nên dùng đồng nhất dạng thức của từ nhé. Có thể em dùng ở câu trước là "a stream" thì câu sau em có thể dùng this stream. Hoặc là nếu câu trước em để streams thì câu sau em nên để "these streams" và chia động từ to be thành "are" nhé!
Anyway, ý tưởng của em tốt, từ vựng tốt. Goodluck!
My hometown is Hanoi, Hanoi is the capital city of Vietnam. It’s quite nice and large. The city always busy and have many populations.
The city located on the right bank of the Red River. Hanoi locates at 1760 km north of Ho Chi Minh City. The city has the weather of northern Vietnam, the summer are hot and wet, the winter quite cold and dry. The summer in Hanoi is very long, from May to August and has the heavy rain are 1680 millimetres. The winter are short, cold, dry while spring can bring rains. The autumn in Hanoi is the best season in a year, romantic and very cool. Hanoi is also has some notable famous museums: National Museum of Vietnamese History, Vietnamese Museum of Evolution, Ho Chi Minh Museum. There are so many places for entertainment in Hanoi can find easily in the city. Modern and traditional theaters, cinemas, karaoke bars, dance clubs, bowling alleys, and many shopping centres for both locals and tourists. Hanoi has been named as one of the top ten cities for shopping in Asia by Smart Travel Asia. Hanoi has rich food and many Vietnam’s most famous cuisines, such as ”pho”, ”cha ca”, ”banh cuon” and ”com”. Most famous is ”Pho”, a simple rice noodle soup often eat as a breakfast bowl at home or on street, but also serve in restaurants as a meal. So many types of ”pho”: ”Pho Bo” has beef, ”Pho Ga” has chicken, etc.
I live in a mountainous villrye. My parents often tell me stories about their life in the past. It’s not much like the village I can see nowadays. Some villagers now live in brick houses instead of earthen ones. Our houses are better equipped with electric fans and TVs. Thanks to the TV, we now know more about life outside our village. We don’t use oil lamps any more. We have electric lights which are much brighter. More villagers are using motorcycles for transport instead of riding a horse or walking. We — village children — no longer have to walk a long way and cross a stream to get to school, which is dangerous in the rainy season. Now there’s a new school nearby. We also have more visitors from the city. They come to experience our way of life.
Living in the countryside is really good for your life because of these reasons:- First, living in the country can bring you a clean evironment. The air is fresher and there are lots oftrees, rice fields and rivers, you can walk on the fields or along the rivers to enjoy the clean and fresh airthere in the early morning.- Second, living in the countryside is cheaper than in the city because people there have lower income anddon't have the habit of spending a lot of money. If you live in the country, you can save a lot of money.- Finally, people in the country are more friendly and opener than people in the city because they live neareach other. People live together in a small village so they can talk countryside can have festivals and youcan join and fell very happy.In conclusin, there are many benefits of living in the country
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My neighborhood in my father's story is now different from that neighborhood. My neighborhood is very poor in his story. Everyone is living a hard life at that moment. Lack of food, lack of money. It is different now. People no longer live a hard life. They've got enough food, enough money, a house for everybody, and a lot more stuff. Sentiments are the only things that don't change. Everybody will still be very pleased. They work together, and when they need to support each other, that's a privilege. That makes my village, for everyone, a wonderful place. People are just farmers, but in the face of suffering, they have unity. And when they have money in their hands, they are always in unity with each other, they are friendly, they are supportive, they are good people. The landscape is much like the old days. That mountain, that river. Nature, with humans, is peace. People live with nature, people create things from nature, and nature is still accessible to people, providing them with resources to build their home. That's what people are looking for, and they deal with it very well. That's what I can tell about my home village. My village is a beautiful place, in my opinion.
Nowadays, traffic problems are one of the biggest problems that Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, has to deal with. The first problem is traffic jams. There are too many people using the roads, especially in rush hours when everyone is in a hurry to get to work or come back home. Another problem is poor road conditions. The road is too narrow and bumpy. Moreover, many streets in Hanoi are usually flooded when it has heavy rain making it difficult to move. Traffic accidents are the biggest problem. Every day, there are more and more accidents happening because of careless drivers: Driving after drinking alcohol, not wearing helmets, and so on. Therefore, solving traffic problems is not only the agent’s duty of Hanoi but also awareness of ourselves.
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Living in the countryside is really good for your life because of these reasons:- First, living in the country can bring you a clean evironment. The air is fresher and there are lots oftrees, rice fields and rivers, you can walk on the fields or along the rivers to enjoy the clean and fresh airthere in the early morning.- Second, living in the countryside is cheaper than in the city because people there have lower income anddon’t have the habit of spending a lot of money. If you live in the country, you can save a lot of money.- Finally, people in the country are more friendly and opener than people in the city because they live neareach other. People live together in a small village so they can talk countryside can have festivals and youcan join and fell very happy.In conclusin, there are many benefits of living in the country.
Living in the countryside is very wonderful! Why do I say that? Just because there are so many advantages of that thing. First, when you live in the countryside, you can enjoy the fresh air everytime. You can try a lot of fresh foods, such as: vegetables, fish, many kind of meats, ect... Second, we can even develop or produce them. In the countryside, there are a lot of trees, flowers, paddie fields or rivers, so every afternoon, you can play so many games playing marbles, skipping, flying a kite, ...ect even on the road because traffic in the countryside isn't chao in the city. So that, do you want to try living in the countryside?
Next to the house I have a good-hearted neighbor named Uncle Tinh. My house is always close to my house, just a fence wall.
Uncle Love is 49 years old, Uncle more than his 7-year-old father. Highly elastic, thin and thin, but very strong and solid. The black hair is cut short to reveal his well-shaped figure. The black eyes are very bright, but they have a lot of crow's feet due to the hardship of a farmer. Whenever he works, no one can blame him, he is also very agile and resourceful. I often climb the wall to play with his son, because the two of us the same age, in the same class should play very close. One day playing, I forgot to eat lunch, he went to work to see so he told me to stay together to eat meals always. Because of the two students in the same class, every time I go to school, they are always transported by me, sunny and rainy as they arrive on time to carry us.
Uncle loves me, or buy candy for me again. Everybody around him is a gentleman because he is gentle and kind. I consider him as a second father, something I always told him to hear it.
Villages are a beauty and today`s generation is really missing the beauty of villages. Villages are so silent and calm and pollution free. Though I live in a city with the maddening crowd and sound, my parents used to live in villages and I have been there many times.Both my parents come from villages, and I look forward to go their places during my vacations. It is so calm and peaceful and the beauty of nature is just fantastic. With not many families around, they know each other so well, that they all almost live like a large family. You could step into your neighbor’s house at any time and you would be welcomed with yummy dishes and snacks. Though the transportation has advanced, there are still places where you need to walk.I remember, while visiting my grandmother’s place, we had to walk through the paddy fields to reach her home!! It was such an experience that I guess very few, who are of my age would have hadThe backwaters are another beauty to the villages. You have small streams that club to the lakes and backwaters. This stream water is so fresh and crystal clear. You could walk through them and the cool water just rushes over your feet and makes you feel so cool. Hours could be spent by simply sitting and admiring the beauty of nature.The sunset is a beautiful scene to be viewed.